Monday 28 November 2011

Chapter 4 Part 1

                                    "Why are we here again?" Hana asked.
         "To play games of course, which one first? bumping cars or the dance thingy machine?" Batrisyia held out two plastic bags full of tokens. Hana shook her head, Batrisyia dragged her all the way from Batrisyia's house to the Arcade.
               " Let's start with the bumping cars, I'll buy the ticket 'cause the cars works with tickets." Batrisyia cheered.
                                       "Whatever. I'm homesick already!" Hana complained.
                "OK, so sit at this bench and DON'T go anywhere until I come back with the tickets!"
                                                              "OK" Hana sighed.


  Hana sat on the bench as Batrisyia ordered. She do really need a time out after those revision, Hana thought silently I am so so so bored, where the HECK is Batrisyia?? I'm getting sick!.


                            "Hana! LET'S GO!!!TO THE BUMPING CARS!!!" Hana turn her head towards Batrisyia which is yelling and waving her hands.Hana slowly walked towards her. Batrisyia slipped out her Iphone and make a weird face expression.
                           "What's up? SMS from your mom to go back home?" Hana asked
                             "No, it's already 3.45 pm. Another one hour to go online at C.C"
                                                              "Yeah..."
 Hana looked at her watch. Batrisyia was right! Another one hour to go online on Chatroom Chaos.
                          "So let's go to the bumping cars before it's too late!" Hana grabbing Batrisyia's hand.
                                          "Since when you liked Bumping cars?" Batrisyia rolled her eyes.
                                    "Since you're going to belanja me!" Hana grumbled.
At Florida, USA (Abi, Sakura and David)


        "Abi! Can you slow down I'm REALLY TIRED!" Sakura shoved towards Abi.
Abi snapped a glare at Sakura. Sakura stayed still. Very still. Abi was holding a vampire hunting knife.


"Stupid, filthy creatures! They don't even give us a break! I mean I need to rest! I HATE HATE HATE HATE VAMPIRES!!!!" Abi growled and hit a tree.


                                                    PAUSE!
  Abi and the gang are actually members of Vampire Hunting Association. The founder of the association is Cory. Actually those are character from Black Apple.. A Mademoiselle Unknown work.. I'll tell her to make the novel available in her blog.


                         "Don't scare the raccoon! Shoot it's running away!" David said.
                     "It's just a DAMNED RACCOON YOU MORONIC HUMAN!"Abi growled.
                  "Cherry blossoms! Me love Cherry Blossom I love Sasuke!" Sakura said dreamily.


 Abi rolled her eyes. She looked at her friends which forget the whole thing that they should do. Poor Abi, all she have to do is go on and leave them behind. She walked forward leaving her friends behind alone. And yeah like they were in a forest vampire hunting.How cruel is that? But since it's Abi does that...WHAT THE HECK.


                                        "Hey Abi! wait up!" Sakura shouted. 
                          "Yeah! My feet is not that long okay?" David reminded Abi.
                    "Oh For God's Sake, WILL YOU GUYS SHUT UP!?!?!" Abi expressed her anger leaving    David and Sakura stood silently. Abi knelt down to the forest's ground to see any clues of vampire activities around the forest. Sakura sniffed into the air and said "Blood scent!" 


                                          "Shhh! Sakura, David keep down-"
                                      "ROAR!" A voice thundered the whole forest. 
 They ran to the nearest bush and stay low with their weapons ready. David was shaking and Sakura closed her eyes. Abi peeped to confirm if the sound came from a vampire. Yes there was a vampire, all dressed in white. Abi gave Sakura and David the signal to get ready. 
                   "On a count of three you shoot" Abi pointed at David who hold a vampire gun.
 Abi counted her fingers while David gulped. David shot him, in the leg. White blood starts to came out from the vampire's leg. Abi jumped out and gripped her vampire knife. Abi examined the vampire and saw a stain of human blood on his shirt. Without hesitation she stabbed the vampire. Abi examine the vampire for the last and....
                  "I SHALL KILL YOU!!" The vampire grabbed her neck leaving Abi suffocating.  Sakura and David was too shocked to do anything and stood there. Abi quickly grabbed her vampire knife and stabbed the vampire in the heart. The vampire closed his eyes and died. Abi sucked in air as a sign of relief.
              
                      "That's the last for today" Abi took a deep breath making herself to relax.
                "It's 4.15 pm now.. Hana told us to log in 4.45 pm and let's go back home!" Sakura said
       "Yeah, I almost forgot about that..RACE YA!!!" Abi said and ran off leaving Sakura and David behind.
                            "WAIT UP!!!!!" Sakura and David cried as they tried to catch Abi but failed.


-At Chatroom Chaos website-
[Hana has logged in]
[Boring! has logged in]


H: sup?
B: Oh, you already gone home?
H: Duh no Trafiic jam.
B: Good to know...


[Karen has logged in]
[Abi has logged in]
[Sakura has logged in]
[David has logged in]   


A: Yum that was good Edward fries!
Edward Carbonara anyone?
S: OOH ME!!
H: Me too!!
[Abi, Sakura and Hana eats joyfully ]                


H: Batrisyia want some?
B: LOL! Wish I could! Kita puasa..
H: Oh that's why you don't eat the burger..
B: Hihihihihi
S: What is 'puasa'?
B: Puasa is fasting..you cannot eat from dusk till dawn!
S: Is it healthy?
B: Of course!
A: stop talking start eating except for you Batrisyia coz you can't eat.


[Rukia_chappy has logged in]
RC: Hello everyone!
B: Hi! Glad you can come!
RC: Anytime, well the background's cute!
B: You like it?
RC: yeah especially the bunny one.
H:?????
S: OOOOH ARE YOU JAPANESE????
RC: Yeah.
S: WELL I AM TOO!!!
RC: Kon'nichiwa! Watashinonamaeha Kuchiki Rukia-desu.
S: Sokka! Nīsu-mei
RC: Arigato Gozaimasu!
S: Doitashimashte.
H: Okay can we just stop talking Japanese and eat!
RC: Ohhh! What's on the menu
K: Here I made this while you guys are chatting!


Wrote by: B.A.S




Chapter 3 part 3

  Hana shook her head. Weird, since when Sakura become so....mentally disable...weird...Hana thought.
Hana looks at Batrisyia which is behind her and Batrisyia smiled. 


                           "Batrisyia, why are you grinning?" Hana said.
                     "Somebody online'd* in CHATROOM CHAOS!!!"
                                               "Who is it?" 
                                "EDWARD CULLEN!!! YAY!"
 Hana screamed while Batrisyia smiled like hell. Hana looked at Batrisyia with a very very very creepy face..


              "IT'S SUPPOSE TO BE AN ANTI-TWILIGHT CHATROOM YOU MORON!!!!" Hana shouted.
           "Tee hee... well err..I don't know why he online'd, anyway?" Batrisyia pretended to rolled her eyes.
           "AARGH!!! THE EXAM IS WORST BUT EDWARD CULLEN ONLINING IN MY CHATROOM IS WORSTER!!!!" Hana shouted again.
                                                     
            "Duh it's just Edward Cullen! It will be more WORSTER is Sasuke, Kuchiki Rukia or Sousuke Aizen onlined tomorrow. " Batrisyia tried to calm down Hana's guts but she (Hana) shouted like a girl had seen a ghost.
         
           And then Batrisyia's Facebook Message Icon started to notified her that she has 3 new messages.
She reads them and shouted.
           "Sasuke and Rukia found out about our chatroom and they want to online tomorrow" Batrisyia said in a horrific tone. Hana gave Batrisyia a look and sulked. Batrisyia smiled.
                                        
                                            "Why are you smiling ?" Hana asked.
              "We have enough people! 9 people altogether!!!We don't have to delete the chatroom!" Batrisyia said.
                                     "YAY!!! LET'S CELEBRATE!!!" Hana announced.
                        "Banyaklah! We have to studylah! You're gonna fail if you don't-" Batrisyia warned.
               "FINE! FINE! FINE! We study first and then celebrate!" Hana protested.
                      "YES!!! We can celebrate at the nearest shopping mall, Leisure Mall!!!" Batrisyia said.
      
                  
        
*B: Is that even a word? I don't know      

Wrote by: B.A.S

Saturday 26 November 2011

Chapter 3 part 2

                       " 3 people more! What can we do?" Batrisyia think aloud.
                  "Well, you MADE the chatroom so it's up to you what you should do!" Hana protested.
                                "Ah-ha! We just public our chatroom!" Batrisyia said!
                     "P-p-public? You mean everybody can see our chatroom?" Hana stammered.
                                   "Yeah! So it's easier to get people come!" Batrisyia cheered.


 Hana stared at Batrisyia.Public! No way! Not in a hundred years! The chatroom is like my OWN life! Nobody can just like look into my life! Hana thought. Hana took a deep breath.
                 
                  "I don't know Batrisyia, it's it safe?" Hana tried her best to make Batrisyia's mind change.
                "Of course! But the password will be off!" Batrisyia explained.
                "Can we just make it public but still have the password on?" Hana suggested.
                "Of course! How I couldn't think like you! We can make it public!" Batrisyia said and hit public button on the settings of the chatroom.  
               
                                                -Few minutes later-


                   "Abi,Karen, David and Sakura had logged in" Batrisyia's computer said.
                                             "Yay!" Batrisyia cheered.




        Hana used Batrisyia's PC while Batrisyia use her laptop. The two girls are ready to announce what happen to the chatroom.




B: Okay guys we need to say something.
H: We? You made the chatroom...
A: Okay! What the Fudge happen here?
S: I LIKE TOASTED CALCULATORS!!!!
D: I heard this movie Mak Limah Balik Rumah movie..Is Mak Limah Hot?
K: WTF????
             [Batrisyia laughed like hell]  
B: Actually, She is an old lady.
A: Hahahaha!!! David fell for an old grandma!!
D: HEY!!!!!
S: Toasted pencil anyone?


Wrote by: B.A.S
Note:(Why should I even bother to write this book.. Oh well you have to finish where I've started!)

Thursday 24 November 2011

Chapter 3 part 1

-AFTER SCHOOL ON FRIDAY AT BATRISYIA'S HOUSE-

                       "Mom, I'm bringing a friend upstairs!" Batrisyia said. 
                                  "Who is it?" Batrisyia's mom asked.
                                "Hana, a very very very old friend!"
                                "I'm not that old Kay?" Hana scolded.


 Hana and Batrisyia went upstairs to Batrisyia' room. Hana scanned around her friend's room. 
                     
                    "Pink? My friend's room is pink? HAHAHAHAHAHA" Hana laughed.
                            "Shut up! I chose the colour pink when the house on renovation."
                     "OK, so what's up with the chatroom?" Hana's voice turned serious.
                     "This is the job for Higglytown HEROES!" Batrisyia sang.
                             "Please don't make me puke, seriously."
 Hana look at Batrisyia, why did I bother to befriend you Batrisyia?  Hana thought silently. She befriended a TOTAL weirdo. Batrisyia is likely to be a weirdo most of the time rather than being a normal primary 5 female student. Hana sat on Batrisyia's bed and stared at the window which is at the back of the mattress side. 
                   
                  "Hana, actually if you and me plus Abi and her other 3 friends..that means." Batrisyia said while  counting with her fingers.
                   "6 people! We just need to find 4 people more!" Hana blurted out.
                      "Where we could find other 4 loyal chatroom people?"
  Hana looked at her watch it's almost 4.30, it's been 50 minutes she stayed in Batrisyia's place. She told her mom that she had a sleep over at Batrisyia's place.Her mom let her as her house was full of 'unwanted' distractions.
  
Wrote by: B.A.S

Wednesday 23 November 2011

Chapter 2

  KRIIING!KRIING! The alarm clock started to rang the whole of Batrisyia's room. Batrisyia woke up with a cheerful face. At last FRIDAY! I can spend the whole Friday night with homework and revise for the exam! Batrisyia thought. She took out a notebook and a pen. She wrote:-


  1. Homework and revise for exam this night
  2. Saturday check out Chatroom Chaos
  3. Sunday SLEEP!
                    10:15 AM at Hana's and Batrisyia's school (Sekolah Islam Adni)
  
  "What's with the look Hana, you're creeping the guts off me" Batrisyia mumbled as she chew some sandwich in her mouth.
           "I can't sleep, I can't eat, I CAN'T DO ANYTHING JUST BECAUSE I'M TO HAPPY" Hana squealed. 
           "Takkan sampai at THAT stage kot your happiness.." Batrisyia keep on chewing her sandwich.
       
    Hana laughed as she heard what Batrisyia had said nano-second ago. Batrisyia kept munching her sandwich as Hana continued eating her spaghetti in the noisy cafeteria. 
                           
                                                         PAUSE!!!!
      OK! LOL! I put Malay language in this novel so for the viewers who doesn't understand the language you can just comment at below! And sorry to to say that this series will have A LOT of pause and plays! But don't worry the 2nd and the 3rd book will be more awesome than this!!
                                                          PLAY!!!!
      
                  "I have something to tell you Hana." Batrisyia said after finishing her sandwich.
                                                     
                                                 "What?" Hana mumbled


                   "I forgot to tell you but there's something wrong with the..errr" 
                                            
                                                "What's wrong with what?"

                  "The chatroom will be deleted if we don't have 10 people minimum in our chatroom!"
    
   Hana opened her jaws wide open.Her normal life was ruin! She was holding her grip. She can't loose the chatroom! Hana swallowed her spaghetti..... 


                  You know the freaking word...
                          
                                   CHAOS!!!!!!
Wrote by: B.A.S

Tuesday 22 November 2011

Chapter 1 part 3

             "You can stop now, I call you after I finish with the chatroom thingy" Batrisyia said.
                         "Okay, I know I can count on you, computer head!" Hana said.
                       "Sanggup engkau panggil aku kepala komputer!!!" Batrisyia sulked.
                                            "Bye" Hana said.
                       "BUH-BUE HANA BANANA!!!!!!" Batrisyia shouted
                                    "Dude, don't hurt my ear drums."
                                        "Sorry Hana's ear drums!! "
  After Hana had disconnected, Batrisyia continued on making Hana's chatroom. She spend most of her time  
looking at the screen with all the number codes that can make everyone in the world faint-except for computer geniuses because they had train for years just to master the number language.
                                       
                                            TWO HOURS LATER
         
                                                   "Helloo?" Hana said.
                     "Done! Now you have to open www.chatroomchaos.com"
                                                  "What's the code?"
                                          "Life sucks and then you die"
                      "Small letters right? And why the hell you put Jacob Black's chapter name?'
                                 "Yep small letters and I don't know what to do."
                              "After the semester break I will change it." Hana announced.
                             
   Hana can't believe it. She wants to scream at Batrisyia's face if she was here beside Hana. Hana had her OWN chatroom. Now she can talk and chat like normal teenagers. But if Batrisyia is in the chat it won't be a normal one. After the chatroom loaded words flash in front of the screen.
                 


                                        Welcome to Chatroom Chaos;
                          Now you are currently a member of this chaotic chatroom,
                                          Please don't do anything normal;
                                Please invite your craziness and weirdo inside you;
                                              In this chaotic Chatroom.


     Hana open a new tab and quickly e-mailed her Florida friends. She has this awkward feeling that this chat would REALLY bring them chaos-but it's just a FEELING right? Or is this some kind of nervous rays inside her body tingling inside her. (We'll never know unless you guys are loyal enough to follow this chaotic series).
   Hana is really excited this time, REALLY REALLY REALLY EXCITED. She clicks back at the Chatroom Chaos tab and started to chat with Batrisyia.
   
   [Boring! has logged in]
   [Hana has logged in]


B: Hey Hana glad you can make it!
H: I told Abi and her friends about this chatroom
B: Great! NOW I HAVE TIME TO GO CRAZY!!!! YAHOO!!!
H: What?
B: Oh My Grandpa! It's 8.00 pm already! I don't get the chance to study for  the Maths Test!! Gotta go!
H: Wait! Since when you are SO serious about studying?
B: Since YOU became my friend.
H: Yeah you're right! BYE!
B:Bye!
  [Boring! has logged off]


  Oh great! JUST SO GREAT! I'm lonely! Maybe Batrisyia WAS right! I do need to study!  Hana thought. But it's just a math test, what's so great about math test? She continued thinking.
                               "HANA!!! STUDY NOW!!" Hana's mom started shouting.
                               
            This.Is.Chaos...
                                             CHAOS!
             
Wrote by: B.A.S

Chapter 1 part 2

  ~5.30 pm at Batrisyia's house~
    "Phew! homework all done" Batrisyia swept of  beads of sweat around her neckline.After five minutes; Batrisyia's phone sang the Pocoyo theme song. "Hello!" Batrisyia said.
                                  "It's me Hana, So let's get started with!"  
                     "OK there is so MANY type of chatroom that we can build!"
             "Erm, How 'bout a private one, We can build a code so only CERTAIN people can enter"              
                            "Interesting! So gimme a second to open my laptop!"


     Batrisyia opened her blue laptop and opened:-
                                         CHATROOM BUILDER
                           Where you can make your own chatroom that suit your taste!


      Batrisyia continued talking to Hana.
                 "Okay you mentioned about a chatroom with a password." Batrisyia confirmed.
                "Yes, so the name of the chatroom will be err....I don't know.." Hana scratched her head.
                                       


                                "CHATROOM CHAOS!" Hana and Batrisyia shouted together.
               "So why you want a chatroom Hana? Do you have a boyfriend or something" Batrisyia asked.
"EWW! A boyfriend you've gotta be kidding me!Actually I want to keep in touch with my friends in Florida" Hana said
                                "Abi, Sakura, David and Karen Right?" Batrisyia said.
                             "Darn it I shouldn't let you read my novel." Hana said.

                                                          PAUSE !
      So anyways you guys might think what the hell is going on right? Actually Batrisyia and Hana are friends since primary 4. Hana is a talented writer who actually wrote novels in hard cover note books and passed it around the class so the whole class can read it. Batrisyia, on the other hand is a talented artist that can draw humans, scenery and you name it. The two girls got along because Batrisyia is 99% insane or you could say crazy. Batrisyia have the guts to friend with Hana. Until now, they've become best friends- not forever. Read on because I'm lazy to write about the descriptions directly.
                                                            PLAY!


Wrote by: B.A.S
  

Monday 21 November 2011

Chapter 1 part 1

   "Dude are you like really sure" Batrsyia crack up the whole conversation. "I mean the thing is, YOU JUST CHOSE THE WRONG TIME AND THE WRONG PLACE!" Batrisyia merely shouted. Hana stood there continue writing about some ideas about a chatroom."Relax, it's just another typical chatroom like all the teenagers have." Hana said with her cool voice.
                                 "You're really got into my nerves y'know?"
                                 "So, I'm the one who's doing the hard work here!" 
                                 "Think again smarty pants! You gave me THIS!"
    Batrisyia showed her the note:-
                       Dear Bats Bats,
  Can you do a chat room for me? PLEASE!!!I DON'T KNOW COMPUTER STUFFS!!!I LOVE YOU!!!
                                                                                                                         Love,
                                                                                                                         Hana

                                       "Oh yeah, sorry!"
                                      "Not cool Hana, NOT COOL!"
                                      " Why you're so upset? It's just a chatroom!"
                                     "Hello! Last sem examination for primary 5 it's like one month more!"
                                    "Oh yeah! Sorry, I forgot.We'll plan a timetable. A tight one!"
   Batrisyia once again shook her head."Fine! After 5.30 pm call me.Got it?". Hana nodded in the sign of yes.
The both girls return to their class after they finished their food.
                            
                                      
Wrote by: B.A.S